Pitch FEEDBACK.

From doing my Pitch i got feedback that would help us to progress into a higher grade.
From feedback we got told that we need to organise our filming schedule tighter so that we have a clear idea of what we need to film, as our dates are mixed up. Also we need to think of what the rest of the film would be about so we could focus on the opening better.
We also got told that we should film more than enough footage so we can fill the 2mins. We should film cut aways, location shots ect.
Also we need to talk about what our target audience is we orginally said 12-22 but from thinking about it twice we need to make it closer together, so from re thinking about it its aimed at 14-19  year olds.
Because 12 year olds are too young to have a good understanding about smoking, pills, bulling and death, so we raised the target age. Our audience will be mainstreamers, in the working class catagory