Feedback for our pitch

After our pitch we got feedback from Marisa then will help make our teen filming opening.

Advice:

- To re adjust out target audience as it may be inappropriate for ages 12, and doesn't appeal to 22 year olds.
we have now changed the target audience range to 15 to 19 this age is best suitable as the film most relates to audience of this age.

- make sure we have enough footage to cover the 2minutes
we will film enough scenes that will fit 2 minutes even extras.